tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7629159.post5799642793687943153..comments2024-01-03T16:43:28.343-05:00Comments on BillyBlog: Why I Stopped Reading Halfway ThroughTattoosdayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07919816455252541604noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7629159.post-35690568639526066922009-02-26T12:25:00.000-05:002009-02-26T12:25:00.000-05:00Is it the quadrantOf the moon?I like this a lot. Y...<I>Is it the quadrant<BR/>Of the moon?</I><BR/><BR/>I like this a lot. You get away from the first, obvious question (<I>Is it the book / Or is it me?</I>) quickly, and the following six possibilities (moon, air, birds...) seem at once striking but inevitable.<BR/><BR/>And your flagrant imitation of Langston Hughes did not go unnoticed.<BR/><BR/>(I wonder, though, at having the moon and the stars occupy separate couplets..? It seems like there must be <I>something</I> else, maybe?)<BR/><BR/>Very readable. Accomplishes its modest ambitions nicely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com